wow! this was amazing! you tied up the two stories quite well with tsuzuki not wanting to kill girl!aya and aya freaking out and then hopeful at the end. tsuzuki's demand for chocolate ice cream was the perfect touch! and great job with their characterisations too!
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Date: 2007-04-26 09:37 pm (UTC)thank you for writing and sharing.