So Tam mentioned this story to me the other day, and I thought before I got caught up on SD (and apparently everything else you've written. Daaamn, girl), I'd check it out. I really enjoyed it. I admit, I was a bit shocked when Tifa came in topless. It was a pretty big risk for her to take for a guy she hadn't heard from in a while. But then as the shock broke for both the reader and Cloud, you showed just how nervous she was, and how much of her heart, body, and soul she was laying on the line. You really captured her beautifully. She can be guarded with her emotions, but when the time comes, she was always the type to press forward through her own doubts and insecurities. I think that between Zack's encouragement and Chocobo Head's chocoboheadedness, she'd reach a point where she was going to give it all she had. The smut was--as always--beyond awesome, but I think my favorite part came when Cloud's choking over the idea of her working in a place like that. The line that she was his everything--I definitely felt that as much as Cloud.
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Date: 2010-03-25 01:34 am (UTC)Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.