http://amethyst-key.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] amethyst-key.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kinkfest 2010-03-17 07:35 pm (UTC)

Prompt here... again! (You've written for a ton of my prompts this time!)

I actually didn't have anything specific in mind for what I was expecting with this prompt, and if I did, I'm sure this would be so much better than my idea!

I love the wording you use to set up the image and feeling in the beginning -- Cloud's pain and desperation, how lost he is, how empty... and then, Tifa appears, giving him hope and bringing him out of the shadows.

Also, loved:
He had a name...

“Cloud?”
Like, she gave him back his name.

He had a purpose...

“Hello, Tifa.”
She's become his purpose.

He no longer needed a number. ... because he has her. (Am I reading into this too much?) Anyways, I loved loved loved what you did with this. :D

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