ext_191829 ([identity profile] ladyofshadow.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kinkfest 2007-07-02 02:59 pm (UTC)

I loved this line Dokugakuji thrust; sweat trickled down his spine to pool in the dip of his lower back. The image of where the sweat pooled was quite vivid.

Nicely done!
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