That is my actual face right now. I looooong always (always!) for fic about them as fumbling teens and this is delightful. I love both of their individual methods of denial and the way that they acknowledge the lines that should be drawn between them, but that don't seem to matter anyway.
I love how you wrote about the way that they're just pulled towards each other and I especially liked Riza's insecurity about how attractive Roy is and about his dedication to alchemy because, yeah, with her dad you have to imagine she'd be hesitant on that score.
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Date: 2010-07-07 10:52 am (UTC)That is my actual face right now. I looooong always (always!) for fic about them as fumbling teens and this is delightful. I love both of their individual methods of denial and the way that they acknowledge the lines that should be drawn between them, but that don't seem to matter anyway.
I love how you wrote about the way that they're just pulled towards each other and I especially liked Riza's insecurity about how attractive Roy is and about his dedication to alchemy because, yeah, with her dad you have to imagine she'd be hesitant on that score.
Excellent job!