Initially, I clicked on this because the character on your icon reminded me of Hanamichi Sakuragi XD
I'm not familiar with this fandom at all, but this was awesomely funny!
I think you did a great job at capturing the awkwardness that such a situation can create. And I like how you used language in this fic: the dialogue is just as crude as you'd expect it to be of teenage boys and I like how your writing style itself is very casual, befitting the theme of this piece.
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Date: 2010-07-15 11:38 pm (UTC)I'm not familiar with this fandom at all, but this was awesomely funny!
I think you did a great job at capturing the awkwardness that such a situation can create. And I like how you used language in this fic: the dialogue is just as crude as you'd expect it to be of teenage boys and I like how your writing style itself is very casual, befitting the theme of this piece.