I actually didn't ship anyone with anyone when I was watching the show (I was yet to be introduced to the marvellous concept of writing porn about literally anything, including eyes, frogs, crabs and tables)
But now that you have written it, I agredd with you characterization. It's lovely how you've kept them in character - I loved Jin's reactions (he's my fav, okay? XD), the contrast between Jin and Mugen, Fuu's thoughts (so HER: how she had that silly crush on Jin, her view on Mugen).
Of course, it's up to Mugen to arrange a threesome, LOL (and to blow Jin - hnng, that was very suggestive)
I can't comment on the writing itself and don't expect me to, but you did great job with keeping them IC and treated them with extra care, so ♥
thank you for giving me the link, I would have never found it otherwise;)
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Date: 2011-05-05 10:03 am (UTC)[/fangirl mode on]
THIS.
I actually didn't ship anyone with anyone when I was watching the show (I was yet to be introduced to the marvellous concept of writing porn about literally anything, including eyes, frogs, crabs and tables)
But now that you have written it, I agredd with you characterization. It's lovely how you've kept them in character - I loved Jin's reactions (he's my fav, okay? XD), the contrast between Jin and Mugen, Fuu's thoughts (so HER: how she had that silly crush on Jin, her view on Mugen).
Of course, it's up to Mugen to arrange a threesome, LOL
(and to blow Jin - hnng, that was very suggestive)
I can't comment on the writing itself and don't expect me to, but you did great job with keeping them IC and treated them with extra care, so ♥
thank you for giving me the link, I would have never found it otherwise;)