That was beautiful. A perfect sex scene with perfect descriptions. Nothing vulgar or disgusting, but sweet and sensual. I love how you mentioned that it was their first time in awhile, and Cloud was just so darn cute! The bit with Zack and Aerith at the end was adorable and funny, adding a touch of lightness to the whole fic. Thank you for writing this!

Also, V-Ninja's being shy. --Points up-- She's the prompter. Very nice work!

-Valk