Ah, the possibilities of the Visoreds going back--I'd love to see this in the manga, but with that completely rushed ending, we're left with no conclusions for them.

I love how you wrote Lisa and Nanao's conversation--Lisa would no doubt recognize Nanao in a first glance, and their dynamic is wonderful, though I see the awkwardness seeping through from Nanao and Lisa feeling sort of displaced.

Wonderful writing!