You give yourself too little credit. This is actually my favorite of your Sephiroth/Saturn pieces. I've read several of your others, and they tend to be very dark (not saying that's bad; I'm all about open interpretation). This piece, true to its name, has balance. It also shows that a shift is occurring in Sephiroth's character and what effect Hotaru has had on him. It's so lovely to see that he can't bring himself to corrupt her because...he is in love with her...and hasn't realized it yet...that's just my interpretation. Hotaru hopes that her song will help Sephiroth, so is she aware of the fact that he's trying to corrupt her? I she hoping to bring him closer to the side of light and goodness? I really loved the last sentence, "Hotaru was far too beatiful balanced between the light and the dark for him to ever make her fall" though believe you meant to say "beautifully balanced;" just wanted to point that out for whenever you go back and edit. ;) Keep up the good work.
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Date: 2007-10-21 05:53 am (UTC)