I think a lot of it is that I want to detail out everything and I think with this prompt, a lot can be left unsaid. (I mean, hey, chick flick :D) So I just need to timeskip a bit. ~_^ It will also help if I do more highlighting, since I need to have all three POVs several times throughout the duration of the fic. (After all, Aya doesn't take all of this lying down ~_^)