Your writing is always so beautiful. If it's a fandom I know and it's written by you, I don't care who the characters are, I'll read it.
This was gorgeous, and you have a way with imagery and concepts and metaphor that I've seen imitated in other people's fic, but never seen equalled.
Also, you get their speech patterns absolutely spot on, something that's hard to do for this fandom and set of characters I think. But all the way through there's not a word out of place, and not a spot of dialogue here that couldn't have been lifted directly from the game.
For some reason I particularly loved this line:- "The thought frightens him, because Larsa understands no limit, and because all the world obeys when Larsa speaks."
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Date: 2008-06-14 11:08 am (UTC)This was gorgeous, and you have a way with imagery and concepts and metaphor that I've seen imitated in other people's fic, but never seen equalled.
Also, you get their speech patterns absolutely spot on, something that's hard to do for this fandom and set of characters I think. But all the way through there's not a word out of place, and not a spot of dialogue here that couldn't have been lifted directly from the game.
For some reason I particularly loved this line:- "The thought frightens him, because Larsa understands no limit, and because all the world obeys when Larsa speaks."