I love love love your writing style in this; it's nothing short of amazing! The way you describe it wasn't anything too long, but gives the reader such an acute image in their minds. Very very very nice! I love your way of describing Wolfram as he 'falls' and Gwendal's reaction, until it slowly full focuses on them; gah, in short, it's absolutely lovely!
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Date: 2008-06-13 02:40 pm (UTC)