Oooo... more than I had hoped for when I gave the prompt. I love that you chose the backarc Byakuya and that he's still learning through this.

I really, really love the grace of Yoruichi through his eyes, through his training and his knowledge of what is happening. That extension of hers and how he sees the train of it through her body is just wonderful, gorgeous and sensual.

And I love that he makes his own memory of the moment, and wins his own contest in a way. Lovely and wonderfully written.

Thank you!