ext_226980 ([identity profile] goodbye-halcyon.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kinkfest 2008-08-25 11:25 pm (UTC)

Christmas had come and gone before Roxas realized what Axel had meant by “the only one I ever liked.” <-- that line was /perfect/. Perfectly written, perfectly placed, all of it.

And I loved how Axel reminded Roxas that he wasn't the same. It made this fic different from a lot of others. It really has a lot of opportunity to be expaneded upon. I don't know if you're a chapter-fic kind of person... but I'd love to maybe see this turn into one? **hopeful**

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