That was really nice. I don't know the fandom (clicked on a whim) so I'm merely admiring the writing. Nice rhythms, great tension - which peaks, dips and finishes with a promising upswing. The bond you paint between the two characters is very strong, very compelling. A good read!
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Date: 2008-06-16 04:20 pm (UTC)