I will die when you write a full lemon, because just reading this made me ansty all day. I love the scent focus - so many people forget to use scent when writing and for Kurama, scent is a very powerful factor.
Loved the silent subtle communication between them: the slight rise of an eyebrow, the quirk of a smirk. You nail them everytime and when I read your fics I feel like I'm watching them from a corner of the room.
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Date: 2008-07-11 03:28 am (UTC)Loved the silent subtle communication between them: the slight rise of an eyebrow, the quirk of a smirk. You nail them everytime and when I read your fics I feel like I'm watching them from a corner of the room.