ext_9966 ([identity profile] animegoil.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] kinkfest 2008-06-18 02:16 pm (UTC)

I really think the idea is worth continuing. I will admit the ending seemed a bit rushed-- all of a sudden they were beginning to kiss and do this and that, and for purposes of tying it up it worked, but it would have been nice to see the pacing pulled out a little more, as I'm sure you would have done had not your computer died *laugh* So yeah, please continue!

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