I love how you just gave the reader a few moments in time between these two delicious crazies.
The smooth silk of both men is kept up perfectly with the banter and actions.
Very vivid imagery: "A good observer,’ he rasped between pants, ‘takes care to… analyse. . .every angle.. . And there’s no escape. . .from my eyes here. . ."
I can just feel and see it all go down! Or did they go down? Hee.