The ending seemed a little... abrupt, perhaps, but I quite enjoyed reading this. Although I like Fran/Penelo, I'd never really thought about Fran/Ashe before, so this was a new experience, lol.

I did catch a couple of errors, though; "They fought for dominance over the kiss, each to proud to let the other win." should be "too" rather than "to". Also, at one point you wrote "Ashe fell to the floor", but it should be the ground, as they're outside, right?