It makes me cringe at hygiene. But the human race lived this way (only with mammoths and buffalos and lizards instead of dragons) for eons.
Sex is therefore hot but all squirmy. You got across the desperation, the just-barely-surviving aspect of this really, really well. And the dragon is ssneaky, as many of the foes in FFXII actually are.
Yeep, again.
You are the master of writing disturbing things realistically, in character, and eloquently.
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Date: 2009-06-22 06:42 am (UTC)The gore in this is all so realistic and the way it really would be, as opposed to the shiny "never need the bathroom, only get dirty for dramatic plot point moments and/or comic relief" animé world that FF usually inhabits.
It makes me cringe at hygiene. But the human race lived this way (only with mammoths and buffalos and lizards instead of dragons) for eons.
Sex is therefore hot but all squirmy. You got across the desperation, the just-barely-surviving aspect of this really, really well. And the dragon is ssneaky, as many of the foes in FFXII actually are.
Yeep, again.
You are the master of writing disturbing things realistically, in character, and eloquently.