Awesome dialogue. A lot of times when you read fanfiction with sex dilogue you're thinking "Uh... they wouldn't say THAT..." and then the fanfic is totally ruined. But I can totally see them saying all of that!
Also, great sex. It was intense... but not like rough fucking. It was rough "love making"... if that makes ANY sense at ALL.
So, there are my thoughts. Love the fic, the sex, love the talk... and love the wing.
XD It would be funny to see peoples reaction to the wing:
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Date: 2009-06-26 09:34 am (UTC)Also, great sex. It was intense... but not like rough fucking. It was rough "love making"... if that makes ANY sense at ALL.
So, there are my thoughts. Love the fic, the sex, love the talk... and love the wing.
XD It would be funny to see peoples reaction to the wing:
Yuffie: How the HELL did you grow a WING, Cloud?!
Cloud: ... Sex.