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Title: Treat Him Right
Author: Rana Eros
Rating: Still with the inexplicitness.
Word count: 670
Summary: Tatsumi's behavior changes. Hisoka adjusts.
Author's Notes: For the prompt, "Yami no Matsuei, Tatsumi/Hisoka: Preferential treatment (showing a soft side only to them) - 'Tell me u don't want me to stop.'" Betaed by elizacakeEliza, who did her best to beat the regionalisms out of it.

Treat Him Right

It's not that Tatsumi's nice to him, precisely, though Tatsumi's always been courteous. That, he's certain, is the result of his own courtesy, and his work ethic; it hasn't changed. What has is the way Tatsumi holds his eyes when complimenting his teamwork with Tsuzuki, places a hand on his shoulder when speaking of the dangers of an assignment, asks if he'd like a refill of his tea when going to the breakroom. They're small things, but Tatsumi doesn't do them for anyone else, and that makes them loom large to Hisoka.

Others in the division notice. Hisoka can feel their speculation. Over half of them decide Tatsumi's bribing him to stay Tsuzuki's partner. Only Wakaba, Watari, and Tsuzuki himself guess at the real reason, and their various forms of excitement are headache-inducing.

It's that which makes Hisoka step into Tatsumi's office one afternoon and shut the door firmly. Tatsumi blinks up at him from over one of the ledgers, then straightens and beckons him forward.

"Is everything all right, Kurosaki-kun?"

By mutual, unspoken agreement, they've kept their arrangement out of the office. Except now Tatsumi's brought it in with his preferential treatment, and Hisoka's not quite sure how to address it.

He decides courtesy will serve him, as it always has with Tatsumi. "Tatsumi-san, forgive me, but I've found your behavior of late concerning."

"How--please sit down, Kurosaki-kun."

Hisoka takes a seat across the desk from Tatsumi, and immediately feels the muffling effect of Tatsumi's disciplined emotional state ease the pain behind his eyes. He lets out a small sigh, and Tatsumi frowns, setting his pen down.

"Are you well, Hisoka?"

That makes Hisoka frown, the tension creeping back. "You don't call me that at work, Tatsumi-san."

"I don't, or you'd rather I didn't?"

"I...never expected you'd want to," Hisoka admits, a little at a loss. Tatsumi leans forward, his eyes very blue under his desklamp.

"It would please me, Hisoka, but I'll only do so privately, if it makes you uncomfortable."

"And the rest of it?" Which is both abrupt and discourteous, but Hisoka's certain Tatsumi will forgive him. That's part of the problem, after all.

Tatsumi only looks at him for a moment, then pushes back from the desk and stands. Hisoka starts to rise as well, but Tatsumi holds up a hand. "No, don't get up. I just feel we should be...closer, for this conversation."

Hisoka waits warily, and he can't help closing his eyes as Tatsumi passes behind him toward the seat on his other side, thinking of night and shadows and the solidity of Tatsumi at his back in a bed not his own. Tatsumi turns the other chair to face him, and sits down. If Hisoka were to turn, he thinks their knees would touch. He turns only his head.

"I apologize if I've overstepped any boundaries by treating you differently at the office, Hisoka," Tatsumi says, his voice low and intimate, incongruent in his daylit office. "However, I wonder if you might consider allowing me to continue."

Hisoka blinks, thrown despite Tatsumi's behavior thus far. "What?"

"I don't want to stop." Tatsumi leans forward once more, until there's less than a finger's width of space between his mouth and Hisoka's, but he doesn't touch. "Do you want me to stop?"

Hisoka swallows, and Tatsumi's disciplined, but Hisoka can still feel his desire when they're this close. It always draws out his own. He swallows again, manages to whisper, "Why don't you want to stop?"

Tatsumi smiles. "I like to know I can be like this, and I like the way you respond to me after I've been like this."

Hisoka draws breath to ask what he means, but thinks better of it. He knows; because Tatsumi doesn't do it to anyone else, he finds it flattering. That makes him wonder. "What if I were to treat you like that too, Seiichirou?"

Now Tatsumi touches, one hand on Hisoka's thigh just before Hisoka kisses him. "Then I would respond."

END

Date: 2007-04-06 03:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veleda-k.livejournal.com
*happy sigh* That was wonderful. You write the best Tatsumi/Hisoka. I love the details you give, such as the fact that most of the office thinks Hisoka is being bribed, and the way you mention Wakaba, Watari, and Tsuzuki's excitement (which is adorable and I can definitely see it).

The conversation feels just right to me--all the right amounts of awkwardness, politeness, and passion.

And, of course, I love the ending.

Date: 2007-04-06 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fuyou.livejournal.com
Oh wow, that was just lovely. I agree with [livejournal.com profile] veleda_k: you certainly have a way with writing this pairing. Truly great writing.

Date: 2007-04-06 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lirren.livejournal.com
Oh, this is wonderful! And I love that it's Wakaba, Watari and Tsuzuki who see the truth (and, of course, it sets up the playing field for my secret indulgence in Tsuzuki/Watari *grin*).

Hisoka draws breath to ask what he means, but thinks better of it. He knows; because Tatsumi doesn't do it to anyone else, he finds it flattering. That makes him wonder. "What if I were to treat you like that too, Seiichirou?"

I love, love, love that paragraph. It gives me wonderful shivers to think of Hisoka using Tatsumi's first name. Mmmmm!

Date: 2007-04-06 07:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veleda-k.livejournal.com
and, of course, it sets up the playing field for my secret indulgence in Tsuzuki/Watari

Someday in the not to distant future, I fully plan to write a fic where Watari and Tsuzuki are lovers, and they work together to get Tatsumi and Hisoka together.

Date: 2007-04-06 07:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lirren.livejournal.com
Oh my god. I would be your personal slave for a month if you did that. *whimpers*

Date: 2007-04-10 04:29 pm (UTC)
ext_197528: (Fai-Gay and sparkly)
From: [identity profile] kurenai-tenka.livejournal.com
Vel, you are an amazing person. ♥

Date: 2007-04-27 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] veleda-k.livejournal.com
Heh, I suppose I have to now that I've gone and told everybody about it.

Date: 2007-04-11 03:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lirren.livejournal.com
"Watari and Tsuzuki are totally flirting in the background of this piece. Blame lirren."

Haha! Stalking you is starting to pay off! *rubs her greedy little hands together and starts plotting*

Date: 2007-04-06 05:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jtriskell.livejournal.com
really, really lovely. The last line is pure love.
Thanks so much for sharing.
best

Date: 2007-04-06 06:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] animadri.livejournal.com
Hisoka draws breath to ask what he means, but thinks better of it. He knows; because Tatsumi doesn't do it to anyone else, he finds it flattering. That makes him wonder. "What if I were to treat you like that too, Seiichirou?"

*thud*

Inexplicit, but absolutely beautiful! *flails* at the whole conversation in Tatsumi's office and when Hisoka used his first name... I practically squeed myself out of my chair.

Date: 2007-04-06 08:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravenbell.livejournal.com
I'm just going to sit here and bask in the glow of the awesome. Mmm. Toasty.

Date: 2007-04-06 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karadin.livejournal.com
Mm, nice, thanks so much for posting.

Date: 2007-04-07 03:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mistressrenet.livejournal.com
So terribly understated, and still so very hot.

Date: 2007-04-07 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wordsofastory.livejournal.com
Oh, wow. That is excellent; I can't believe how hot this is, despite everything being so understated. The tension made me hold my breath. Amazing story!

Date: 2007-04-08 08:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] osmalic.livejournal.com
*sigh* Ohhh, beautiful. You worked out the main problem I have with this pairing: their concern for their work ethics. And it's beautifully done, the change so small but still so important for both of them. I love the reaction of the office and how Hisoka deals with it in his no-nonsense way. Most of all, I love how this has actually changed Tatsumi but not in a way that makes him unrecognizeable. Thank you for sharing!

Date: 2007-04-10 04:30 pm (UTC)
ext_197528: (Hisoka PANTIES. XD)
From: [identity profile] kurenai-tenka.livejournal.com
I can never think of something inventive to say, for which I fail. Umm, I like muchily? ^^;

Date: 2007-05-23 05:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chemechic.livejournal.com
I'm so happy that you gave me this link. Now I can get my fix of Tatsumi and Hisoka.

I enjoyed this story just as I have enjoyed your others. You have a wonderful talent with character development in your stories. ^_^

Beautiful XD

Date: 2007-07-08 06:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jtriskell.livejournal.com
Wow. I'm not into Tatsoka so much, but *this* is why I have to make exceptions. The ficlet is brilliant. It's totally in chara for both of them and Tatsumi is just plain *hotness*. *rrr*
*loves*

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