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Title: Contradiction
Author: [livejournal.com profile] aviss
Pairing: Grimmjow/Orihime
Word count: 368
Prompt: Hollow hole - "It was fascinating and horrifying all at once - just like him."
Rating: NC-17


Contradiction


Inoue Orihime had always been good at figuring out people. When she was going to school in Karakura she had been one of he few able to see past Kurosaki's masks, and Kon never managed to fool her. That was the reason she felt so uncomfortable around Grimmjow. She could not figure him out.

Grimmjow Jaegerjaques was a walking contradiction. He was saviour and enemy at the same time. He was violent, rude and incredibly strong. He was proud and rebellious, a Espada who dared to defy his master.

Everything in him attracted and repelled her: his passion and complete disregard for everything except his needs and wants, his madness and bloodlust, his cockiness and fearlessness. He was nothing like Kurosaki, always putting everyone else's needs before his, trying not to hurt anyone and causing more pain with his caring manner.

Even Grimmjow's hole was fascinating and horrifying all at once--just like him. Orihime would never get tired of it, of touching the smoothness of its walls--with her fingertips, with her lips, with her tongue-- of exploring every single inch of it and playing with it, of Grimmjow's reactions to this. He would curse and grit his teeth and pull her hair, pressing her face against it while she licked it.

Orihime asked him once what he felt when she did that, and as a response he pressed her down on the bed and ripped her trousers, spreading her legs wide and mimicking all her previous actions on her own hole until she was writhing and begging, overwhelmed by the feelings. That was the last time she asked him; that almost gentleness unnerving her more than his usual rough manner.

She knew he was not gentle, and she didn't want him to be. Gentleness was what she wanted from Kurosaki--and the only thing she knew would get from him--Grimmjow was not made for that; he was made for forcefulness and selfishness. He was all rough hands and teeth: biting, scratching and taking, claiming her in a way she knew he would never do.

That way, at least for an instant, she was able to forget where she was and who wasn't by her side.

...

Date: 2007-07-06 10:30 am (UTC)
ext_27003: (Grimmjow: jeagerjaques profile)
From: [identity profile] sans-pertinence.livejournal.com
You know, you get better with every fic you write. You characterized these two perfectly. *purrs*

Date: 2007-07-06 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilyat.livejournal.com
Oh man. That was great. :3 I love how true to each character you kept it, all the while still managing to make the way the two interacted believable. I especially liked the repeated contrast between Grimmjow and Ichigo - and how she consciously noted his gentleness as not belonging.


(And yay! That was also my prompt. ^^)

Date: 2007-07-06 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marksykins.livejournal.com
You really did get the horrifying and fascinating down! Good job with the prompt. :D

Date: 2007-07-07 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] goldie.livejournal.com
Oh this was very nicely done! Hot and beautifully IC.

Date: 2007-07-07 04:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravenbell.livejournal.com
The brain has gone splat. This is so perfect for Grimmjow, and the idea of Orihime taking him for everything he's worth is just so twisted and wonderfully wrong.

Date: 2007-07-16 03:21 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
wow loved this

Date: 2007-07-26 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] falls-whisper.livejournal.com
Wow. Grimmy sounds awesome.

//Orihime asked him once what he felt when she did that, and as a response he pressed her down on the bed and ripped her trousers, spreading her legs wide and mimicking all her previous actions on her own hole until she was writhing and begging//

Fabulous!

Date: 2007-07-26 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kane-shi-megami.livejournal.com
Wow...why do I suddenly feel like I'm betraying my OrixUlq ship? Very well written :)

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