Saiyuki (Gojyo/Hakkai)

[misura.livejournal.com]

Title: - (untitled)
Author: misura
Rating: PG
Warnings: None. Well, short.
Summary: It was dark and cramped and uncomfortable, and of course Hakkai had to find brooms in it. In short, it wasn't Gojyo's idea of a good place to have sex.


"What /is/ this?" Gojyo asked, trying to decide whether or not it would be a good idea to lean against the wall. From what he'd seen of the rest of the inn, the place could do with a little patching up, not to say a complete rebuild. Still, the food had been good enough, and the rooms were fairly cheap.

"A broom-closet, I believe." Hakkai closed the door behind him.

"Huh. Don't seem to be a lot of brooms around." Or else, of course, Gojyo might simply not have been able to see them yet, in the half-dark before Hakkai had shut the door. With his luck, he'd probably stumble over one at some inopportune moment.

"Does that mean you're just happy to see me?" Gojyo didn't need to turn around to know that Hakkai was smiling.

"Oh, ha ha. Really, that joke's - " Gojyo abruptly cut off his sentence as he felt something hard and pointy poke him in the back. "What the ... ?" Turning around, he decided that it was, indeed, quite dark in here. He could vaguely make out Hakkai, but not any great deal of details.

"I have found one of the brooms," Hakkai announced. "It seems to be in a somewhat sorry state."

Gojyo managed to stop himself before he inquired how Hakkai could tell, without being able to actually see anything. Hakkai would probably tell him, thereby wasting another minute talking instead of doing something to make this worth the risk of Sanzo shooting both of them - or at least yelling at them and setting Goku to 'keep an eye' on them.

"Just like the rest of this inn," he said instead. "Do you think this wall will even hold?"

"I'd say there's only one way to find out." Hakkai sounded amused, rather than worried. Gojyo hoped that was a good sign. Hakkai's sense of humor might be a little odd at times, but Gojyo didn't think Hakkai would consider the two of them crashing through a wall a laughing matter.

"With a bit of luck, we might give the occupants of the room next to this one something interesting to look at and talk about when they get home," Hakkai added.

"Great." Gojyo snorted. "I've always dreamt about doing something like that."

Hakkai chuckled.

(The wall held, as it turned out.)

Comments

[wedjateye.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much - that was my prompt. It's lovely that Gojyo can tell that Hakkai is smiling, even in the dark - gives it such a warm feeling. I also liked the image of Goku on 'inappropriate touching' patrol. I feel sorry for them though, reduced to a broom cupboard, even though that is pretty much what I requested. :-)

I'm sure the sex was worth it.

[misura.livejournal.com]

Thank you for giving me such a fun prompt to play with - even if the result was rather short, I had quite a bit of fun writing this. :)

[ranmaxryoga.livejournal.com]

(The wall held, as it turned out.)


that made me lol. niiiiice.

[misura.livejournal.com]

Heh. I considered making them /not/ hold, but it seemed unnecessary cruel (and a sure-fire way to have this mini-ficlet turn into something I'd have to stay up very late for, and end up editing to death). Thanks for the comment!

[puddingcat.livejournal.com]

That was the bit I was going to comment on, too!

I like that you said it,a nd I like how you said it as well; it really fitted in the style of the piece well.

Very nice :)

[misura.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm also glad to hear you liked the style I used for this ficlet - especially for shorter pieces, I'm not always sure which one'd work best, so usually I just pick a tense and mood at a whim.