FF7/Sailor Moon (Sephiroth/Sailor Saturn)

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Title: Practice
Author: belladonna12
Rating: PG13
Word count: 164
Summary: It doesn’t do to get out of practice…
A/N: Another one in the ficverse. I seem to have a lot of little one shots for that floating around this round.
Disclaimer: I don’t own the ideas for FFVII or Sailor Moon, nor am I making any money off of this.
Prompt: Final Fantasy VII/Sailor Moon, Sephiroth/Sailor Saturn: Sparring/fighting - “To the victor goes the spoils.”



Practice

WHUMPH! Skid skid skid. CRASH!

Sephiroth had learned a lot of things since leaving Jenova. That he did have a purpose other than destruction. That he actually hated being an early riser, but couldn’t break the habit.

And that Hotaru’s boots hurt when they came into contact with his skin.

It was one of the discrepancies about Hotaru that Sephiroth adored. Normally she was as fragile as a butterfly’s wings. Yet when Saturn came out, she was his equal. It made practice interesting. Sephiroth came out of his musings to see Hotaru crouching next to him, smiling slightly.

“Give up?” Sephiroth grinned up at her.

“No.” With that, he grabbed Hotaru’s ankle and pulled her down, rolling on top of her to pin her and tickle her into helpless gales of laughter. Sephiroth pulled back, smirking.

“I win.” Hotaru smiled up at him, tears of laughter in her eyes.

“To the victor goes the spoils.” She said, and pulled him down for a kiss.

~Fin~

Comments

[usagivindaloo.livejournal.com]

Haha, perfect! I love how you think the same way as me; as Hotaru, she's fragile, but as Sailor Saturn she can kick his ass... and he LIKES it. ;-) I can definitely see their sparring going a lot like this.

Just a small bit of constructive criticism; in the dialogue at the end, it's unclear as to who's talking until the very last line. The "Give up?" line looks like it's being said by Sephiroth, for example. I usually try and have the description of a character on the same line/paragraph as that character's dialogue. So, for example:


"Give up?

Sephiroth grinned up at her. "No." With that, he grabbed Hotaru's ankle, rolling on top of her to pin her and tickle her into helpless gales of laughter. He pulled back, smirking. "I win."

Hotaru smiled up at him, tears of laughter in her eyes. "To the victor go the spoils," she said, and pulled him down for a kiss.

But apart from that, I am awed and humbled by its awesomeness. ;-) Thanks again!

[belladonna12.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it. Mou, I know it's not perfect, my mother'd kill me for doing that, she's normally my beta. In a way, since these were written early in the morning with no caffine, they aren't my best work. I do intend to fix them, when I'm not trying to get everything done at the last minute.