play in the water (and you'll drown) [Kingdom Hearts, Demyx/Sora, PG-13]

[de-yaten.livejournal.com]

Title: play in the water (and you'll drown)
Author/Artist: de_yaten
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Demyx/Sora. Dark. Violence. Noncon implications.
Summary: You should've known better than to mess around with water, Sora. You'll only drown in it.
Prompt: Demyx/Sora; water play, "Seehow, assuming I was weak, or an idiot- that was a bad idea."
A/N: This was kind of depressing to write... but almost in a good way? I like writing not-so-nice!Demyx once in a while. Also I don't think I quite wrote what the prompter probably wanted or expected, but... yeah. Enjoy anyway, I hope! :)



Sora shivered against the damp cavern walls, rattled his chains, and glared. It was all he could do, besides–

up to your waist now, getting higher

—flinch against the sharp-netting twisted and wrapped tight around his mouth, making him bleed each and every time he—

up to your chest now, getting higher

—screamed at Demyx (that the salt water burned, to get away from him, to stop touching him, to nononodon'tdothatplease-) and then (when Demyx said he was bored) screamed for Donald and Goofy and finally (as realization set in)—

up to your shoulders now, getting higher

—for Riku, the King, Kairi, God, someone, anyone, doesn’t-matter-who, to just save-him-please-and-he-didn’t-want-to-die-not-yet-please.

But he was done yelling now. He was focusing his entire energy on breathing through his nose, keeping still, very still, and just hoping that... but there was always hope, he reasoned, even now, when—

up to your chin now, getting higher

—those blue-green eyes were glinting with a smile, so sweet, so kind… so false, so heartless, Goofy would’ve reminded him—if Goofy and Donald hadn’t been chained to a lower platform and—

up to your mouth now, getting higher

—already drowned.

And now there were bubbles sputtering from his bleeding lips—

up to your nose now, getting higher

—and Demyx smiled, sweeter still, and lowered his own mouth to the water, blowing happy child-bubbles to match Sora’s depressing weakening ones, until they grew smaller and less desperate and finally–

up to your forehead now, getting higher

—Sora stopped making them all together. A minute passed, and another—no bubbles, no protests, no warm-blood trickling from his mouth. He was dead, dead and gone, and so—

down to the ground now, getting lower and lower

—Demyx stroked the island-tanned skin, still wet, still (if he pretended hard enough) warm and alive..

“I probably shouldn’t have killed you... I think the Elders wanted you to get more hearts, y’know?

He pressed their lips together (both were cold and dead, but for different reasons) and smiled against them.

“But I told them they were sending the wrong guy…”

Comments

[syvia.livejournal.com]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!

OMG

Well no, you're right, I wasn't expecting this- I was expecting sex.

IT'S LIKE THAT FIC YOU WROTE ME THAT ONE TIME WITH RIKU IN THE PLACE WITH THE STALKER AND OMG YOUR KH-HORROR FIC IS EPIC.

THAT LAST LINE IS WIN.

*rib-crushing glomp*

[de-yaten.livejournal.com]

Have you ever seen The Suite Life of Zack and Cody? ... y'know that happy-jump clap that London does all the time? Yeah, I did that. YAY ME! *clapclapclap*

THANK YOU!!

For some reason your prompts always make me write dark weird freaky stories. I don't know if this is a good thing or not. XD

*glomped*

I'm glad you liked! It made my day happier~~ :D :D

I think someone else claimed this prompt also, maybe they will have some sex for you? XD

[syvia.livejournal.com]

*lmao* XD To my shame (it's not my fault, I have a niece!) I have. I lul~!

NO, THANK YOU!

XD You know where to go if you feel the urge to write horror~.

^^

[lazzchan.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow that was just PERFECT. Evil!Demyx is lovely to see, b/c so many people forget that he's an Organization member for a reason. XD

[de-yaten.livejournal.com]

I think I'm officially hooked on Evil!Demyx now, so this was a blast to write. Although I do like writing him as a kind of nice guy... which I suppose he is, if he wants to be, anyway. He scares me more than the Org members who are "out" as super baddies, because you never really know when he'll go from kind-of-sweet to sociopathic.

And thanks so much, it's really flattering that you liked it! :D

[lover-youshould.livejournal.com]

Guh. ♥

[de-yaten.livejournal.com]

thanks! <3

[de-yaten.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! :D Dark!Demyx is strangely yummy sometimes.

Hahaha, I had to LOL because that icon of Demyx is so cute and sweet. :P

[rhaella.livejournal.com]

Whoa, that last line was perfect. Chillingly so.

[watermage9.livejournal.com]

I don't care for that pairing, but I love your protrayal of Demyx as being his true self;the concealment of his persona to fool anyone finally revealed that exposed his true nature.

[de-yaten.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :) Demyx has always confused me, a bit, but lately I've been seeing him as something a lot darker than what a lot of fandom portrays him as.

Might I suggest (if you're into darker portrayals of Demyx) this (http://community.livejournal.com/springkink/660748.html) and this (http://community.livejournal.com/springkink/637240.html) fic by syvia? They were both like... keyboard-smash worthy in terms of how she wrote Demyx.

[renaissanced.livejournal.com]

EVEN THO IT WOULD HAVE MADE ME CRY... I wish this was how the game was o___o I'm never going to be thinking of that last line the same way again, oh snap XD

[de-yaten.livejournal.com]

I think if that happened in the game, someone's childhood would've been ruined! XD poor Donald and Goofy! Thank you! :D

[crazy-ladi.livejournal.com]

I LOVE YOU.
Wimpy demyx always makes me mad so your Evil!Demyx makes me SO HAPPY.

So very...VERY happy. >:D

[de-yaten.livejournal.com]

I'M LOVED! :)

I'm glad you liked, thank you so much!

*reading rainbow voice* If you liked this Demyx, are two amazing dark!Demyx stories to check out at your local library on this comm: one (http://community.livejournal.com/springkink/660748.html?thread=6907404#t6907404) and two (http://community.livejournal.com/springkink/637240.html). They capture the darker aspect of Demyx perfectly, IMO.

[n-finitefangirl.livejournal.com]

Ahhhh! "Jordi LaForge!" <3 I remember that voice as a delightful part of my childhood... It was partially due to that show that I got into Narnia around 6th grade--and LOTR by 8th.

[goodbye-halcyon.livejournal.com]

omg. That was absolutely amazing!!! I loved Demyx's last line. It takes him to a whole different level.

[crystal-visor.livejournal.com]

Evil!Demyx is made of utter win, and I love this take on him so much. It's true, most people seem to forget he's supposed to be bad, since he's a member of the Organization (although some of them can pull it off). This was genius, and I'll probably re-read it soon \o/