[identity profile] akuchan-47.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] kinkfest
Title: Come as you are
Author/Artist: Akuchan
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Word count: 889
Prompt: Saiyuki, Gojyo/Hakkai: Coming in your pants - "Sure, for the first time you're wearing the right clothes. Now take them off."
A/N: I changed the pairing order of the prompt, and I didn’t actually use the quote given so I hope that this is still acceptable. Beta'd by the wonderful [livejournal.com profile] rroselavy



He wasn’t! NO! Ah fuck no! Godammit, fuck yes, “Hakkai,” his embarrassment leaked through his pain-laced, pleasured moan. Clutching at his best friend’s shoulders, he shuddered, and, with one final thrust against the brunet’s thigh, his release came unbidden as if he were an inexperienced teenager caught up in the frenzy of his very first heavy make-out session. He was Sha Fuck-king Gojyo, lover extraordinaire, he didn't come in his pants like some overly hormonal teenager, but sadly that's exactly what he had done. He couldn't remember another time when he'd been so embarrassed, and as soon as the two lifeless rubber bands that his traitorous legs had turned into stopped wobbling, he'd get his ass out of there. Once he’d detached himself from the brunet, that is.

It wasn’t just his humiliation and the inability to look his friend in the eye that kept his face buried in the crook of Hakkai’s neck. No, it had more to do with the fact that he liked the way that the brunet smelled. The scent was spicy, something that Gojyo couldn’t quite name, but the aroma brought to mind an image of the two of them sharing some hot apple cider on a crisp autumn afternoon. Not to mention, he also found the warmth of his own breath dusting his cheek as it spread across a strong shoulder comforting, until he felt a slight tremor rippling through the body that he was clinging to, that is. He lifted his head at that point, just to make certain, and damn it all, the bastard was laughing at him.

Was it his fault that after a day of endless bitching and general pissy-ness directed toward the brunet, Hakkai had finally had enough, and, after pinning the redhead to the wall by his throat and demanding to know exactly what the hell his problem was, the half demon had been mortified to find that he was excruciatingly and obviously hard? More than just aroused, he was stupid too, because the next thing Gojyo knew, after prying away the choking hold, he’d kept their fingers entwined and had pulled Hakkai forward so that he was then nose to nose with the man who had unwittingly been tormenting his waking fantasies and sleeping dreams for months.

“Ya wanna know what’s wrong with me Hakkai,” he hissed, their mouths mere millimetres apart, “you sure you really wanna know?” And then without further warning he’d kissed his roommate and best friend hungrily, invading the brunet’s mouth and pouring his months of frustration into it.

Getting slammed into the wall again hadn’t surprised Gojyo in the least, but what had been unexpected was the realization that Hakkai hadn’t forced their mouths apart, in fact he’d done a very good job of taking control of the kiss and making the redhead weak in the knees. A hand had combed through Gojyo’s hair and cupped the back of his head; lower down his body the brunet’s other hand had mirrored that action on his ass, while his thigh had forced its way between the hanyou’s legs. Pent up need had had Gojyo mindlessly thrusting, not taking into account, or more to the point, not caring about the probable outcome of the not so subtle rubs against his engorged length that Hakkai had been answering with.

Shaking his head and bringing himself back to the present, Gojyo tried to make his escape to someplace where he could wallow in his humiliation, but Hakkai was having none of it. One of his arms was wrapped around Gojyo’s waist with all the intensity of a band of steel, and with his free hand he’d managed to trap the ones that were attempting to push him away. Gojyo knew that if the brunet were determined not to let him go, attempting to break his hold would be a futile effort; that didn’t stop the hanyou from trying though. His struggle was brought to a swift and effective end when he once again found himself rendered helpless by the mind-numbing talent of Cho Hakkai’s tongue.

When the kiss finally came to its natural conclusion, Hakkai pulled away and Gojyo slumped, boneless, against the wall. Looking shamefaced, he held his hands up in surrender. “You win, Hakkai, laugh away.”

“I’m sorry about that, I wasn’t laughing at you. It’s just that…” the brunet’s cheeks pinked and he dropped his head in embarrassment, “well you see, I was about two seconds away from the same outcome.”

That caught the redhead’s attention. “Is that so?” he leered. His mortification hadn’t left him completely, but that morsel of information certainly helped to lessen it. Dropping his gaze to the tent in his obviously still-aroused best friend’s pants, his eyes glinted devilishly, and he ghosted a finger over the outline. “It’s not very considerate of me to leave you in such a state, now is it?”

“No it’s not, but the same could be said about me,” Hakkai purred, palming the sticky spot on the front of the redhead’s pants. “You must be very uncomfortable. I believe that it would be prudent for the two of us to lose our trousers.”

Gojyo couldn’t conceal the snort of laughter at the brunet’s choice of words. “Only you could make getting naked sound so proper. Though you do make an excellent point.”

Fin

Date: 2007-07-01 05:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-am-zan.livejournal.com
"“Only you could make getting naked sound so proper. "

A nice finish.

Date: 2007-07-01 07:27 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] devikun.livejournal.com
I really love the premise here - that after ages of pent up feelings the first time is rushed, blind and over far too quickly. I really like the tenderness at the beginning - like the emotional dependence that Gojyo fights to resist all his life is finally served by Hakkai's physical presence; and I like the playful humour at the end - the foundations of their relationship reasserting itself again. All in a all, a sweet, hot little fic! Thanks!

Date: 2007-07-01 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] strawberry-smut.livejournal.com
So damn hot...
Love your Hakkai voice.

Date: 2007-07-01 04:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bardicsidhe.livejournal.com
*giggles* Hot and funny at the same time. But that's pretty much Gojyo in a nutshell. Lovely work, thank you! He wasn’t! NO! Ah fuck no! Godammit, fuck yes, “Hakkai,” Somehow you managed to bottle an entire orgasm into a few stream-of-consciousness sentences, and I love you for it.

Date: 2007-07-01 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guiltyred.livejournal.com
He was Sha Fuck-king Gojyo, lover extraordinaire, he didn't come in his pants like some overly hormonal teenager, but sadly that's exactly what he had done.

LOL! That tells it all right there. I love the months of buildup to this, the cracking point where Gojyo just couldn't maintain his cool anymore. And of course Hakkai being so, well, CIVIL about it -- perfect!

Date: 2007-07-01 11:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lauand.livejournal.com
Nice! I loved reading this. All the quotes that the people commenting here mentioned are really great. Thank you for sharing!

Date: 2007-07-02 01:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sorchafyre.livejournal.com
You've got the dynamics of them down the way I've always seen it; Hakkai firmly in control but driven beneath by his own desires, and Gojyo both pliable enough to roll with it and strong enough not to let Hakkai dominate him, regardless of where the control is.

Date: 2007-07-02 02:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] puddingcat.livejournal.com
Wow...

"...the mind-numbing talent of Cho Hakkai’s tongue" made me zone out briefly. And I love the ending :)

Date: 2007-07-02 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amai-kaminari.livejournal.com
Ah, just wonderful! I love the scene you painted here. You've done a lovely job of showcasing many different aspects of their relationship -- their deep and easy friendship, the sexual tension, the way they can make each other laugh and take comfort in each other's presences.

I love how Hakkai reminds Gojyo of drinking hot apple cider together. Besides being the cook, healer and general caretaker for the Sanzo-ikkou, Hakkai really is the embodiment of home and family for Gojyo. Sweet!

Date: 2007-07-10 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amai-kaminari.livejournal.com
No problem! I really enjoyed it! I hope you keep writing more! ^_^ *hint hint* *nudge nudge*

^_~

Date: 2007-07-03 04:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] epiphanytiff.livejournal.com
I just love how clueless Hakkai can seem to appear, when in reality, he knows the score. And, to echo another reviewer. The line ..he was Sha Fuck-king Gojyo.. was so in character with him!

Well done, my friend! Thank you for sharing this with us! Yummy! ^_^

Date: 2007-07-03 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ravenbell.livejournal.com
That's a lovely punchline. Hot stuff all around. Bravo.

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